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You'll never know

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Your words blow through me, chilling my heart
These sentences stringing together, icicles raining down on me
I can't bear to look at you.
I stare into the trees, feeling as naked as they appear
All I can think is, I wish I hadn't found such a way to keep warm last night
and I know you are hurting, but you hurt me too
You feel miles away, if I could only reach out and touch you
It's so cold, we're so cold,
and I'm afraid your love is blowing away with the leaves.
Full title: You'll never know how my heart breaks.


Inspired by A Falling Out. A perspective of one of the characters.

Thanks ~ElectroBaby for your ideas, your heart, and everything else, it's your turn now ;)

*EDIT*
Misty wrote the other character's perpective here [link]
Go read hers, it's awesome :)
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BubbleRoseyPosey's avatar
I empathize so much with this.

And I'm happy with the growing quality of your work.